Evaluation- Progression from preliminary

Progression from preliminary- Like I said previously in my last post, (What I learnt about technology) I have improved drastically on my attention to detail, as before I had one idea and stuck to it. However in my final piece I looked t everything in the smallest of details to make sure everything fitted perfectly. Contrasting this to my preliminary work where I just did everything together. Because of the depth I have gone into on my final piece, it is so much clearer who my target audience is. To the flip side of the coin in my preliminary I didn't make my piece to suit my target audience, my target audience had to fit to my piece.